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This is unbelievable. I dont know how you did it, but by golly this was a blast to read. I got embarassingly far before i realized what was happening. Stellar work—Merry Christmas!

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Merry Christmas, Scoot! I'm glad you like it — and don't worry, I didn't realise what was happening until near the end either!

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Very cool story man! Probably among the best things I’ve read on here.

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Thank you, Cade!

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Jack, this was incredible!! I was hooked! Well done bud 🤗 merry Christmas to you and J ❤️

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Merry Christmas to you as well and thank you for the kind words! With love, J&J ❤️

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So crazy and so good.

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Ong this is so awesome!! But now I wanna know what happens on the other side! 😱🙌

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Thank you Emily. ☺️ And thanks again for organising this!

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No problem, it was such a blast! 🤘

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I've read this story twice. I got the Adam reference. I think i got the ending, but i did get the love part. Good job, Jack.

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Thanks Joseph!

Yeah, the ending is pretty much exactly what it seems to be, I'm sure you got it!

There's a sneaky "Eve" reference in there too, though. 😉

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Wow. This was amazing! So glad I stumbled across it.

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Thanks, Eileen!

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